User talk:April pat/sandbox

Assignment 1
Good job! Medmyco (talk) 01:10, 21 October 2013 (UTC)

Use of the sandbox talk page
Don't put a copy of your article here, I'll use this space to make comments on your article, and to give you feedback. Medmyco (talk) 19:44, 25 October 2013 (UTC)

Feedback
Hey, thanks for the feedback, I'll definitely add an opening description for my fungus. Your article looks good so far, maybe add more info on pathogenicity and infection (ex. symptoms etc.), and a picture if you can find one. Mccull44 (talk) 17:34, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi, thanks for the feedback! I just read yours as well, and here are some of the things I thought: 1) Maybe you can look for information regarding the distribution of the fungus in the world? Is it mainly restricted to certain areas, found worldwide etc? 2)I'm a little confused about the second and third sentences under the "Descriptions" heading. It might just be me, but maybe there's a way to word it more clearly? I don't know, haha. 3) I like the features section! You described it very clearly. :) MinnieVW (talk) 21:21, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Hey there, hope you don't mind me giving you feedback on your article. Your article looks good so far! Under the description heading, I would reword the third sentence. I would also expand the toxicity section. If you can find more information, maybe include how your fungus infects the skin and nails i.e what compounds are involved and the mechanism. Nice work! Mmanuba (talk) 23:23, 31 October 2013 (UTC)