User talk:Aqp24/Evaluate an Article

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This is an excellent evaluation, Aqp24! I'm especially impressed with your close reading of the language used to discuss Mizrahi's accomplishments - I can see exactly what you mean in terms of the subjective praise that is provided rather than the neutral tone expected in Wikipedia articles (particularly for biographical articles). Your recommendations for improvement are also well-supported: indeed, sourcing is a clear issue for this article, as is organization. You address this less directly, but I wonder if re-organizing the entire article chronologically would be a useful way to manage some of the disparities in content? Overall, I am very pleased with your critique! Keep up the good work! Pthomas4 (talk) 17:21, 22 February 2022 (UTC)