User talk:Aqr5626/Oculus Quest 2

Aditya Dhanotia's Peer review
The article presented relevant information in all the sub-headings. Although, the lead section can have more explanation about what is Oculus 2, for people who are strangers to the gaming world. Can talk about how it works and what are its purposes. Additionally, I feel like the hardware section is way too much unnecessary information that non-gamers won't understand. So that can definitely be cut short. Maybe adding what all games can be played in the games section might be helpful. The release section needs to go on top along with the reception section that talks about its features. And the accessories section can go at the last since it has less importance.

Overall, the article follows a neutral tone and since it is a better version of headphones it doesn't necessarily need to talk about the negatives. The sources seem to be operational and good news articles. In conclusion, apart from sentence structuring the article can be more organized by having a logical flow of reading through rearranging the sections. Maybe a new section about it benefits over the earlier version of headsets can be added and cutting short on some sections like hardware or any other can be helpful.

Dhanno1234 (talk) 21:47, 18 October 2020 (UTC)