User talk:Ar2yeh

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Your edit of Talmud
Please see my comments regarding your edits in Talk:Talmud. There has to be something of a fine line walked in presenting viewpoints. Usually it can be dealt with simply by adding an "According to", e.g. "According to Maimonides" etc., before the beginning of a paragraph, and citing a source at the end. Please feel free to ask us for help about how to do this. Also, you might be interested in joining WikiProject Judaism and WikiProject Orthodox Judaism. Best, --Shirahadasha 14:54, 24 October 2006 (UTC)


 * My apologies, I see the edit involved was by User:62.0.106.7, not you. Shabbat Shaolm. --Shirahadasha 18:44, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

Your POV comes through too strongly with your recent edits. I am afraid some softening of your points will be neccessary. Also - take time to read through encylopedias. I think your edits might be improved if you emulate an encyclopedic style rather than the style of academic papers. Academic papers attempt to prove something to a reader already informed of the subject matter - encyclopedic entries, on the other hand, try to relay generally accepted information to an uninformed reader.Guedalia D&#39;Montenegro 16:24, 7 December 2006 (UTC)