User talk:Ar92597/sandbox

Peer Review

After reading your plan, I feel like you are on good track but I want to say that start to planing it out what sources you are gone use for explanation. Give some brief explanation about the information you will add to the article instead of just saying that you will do. For example, in the first paragraph you said that you will find the source or replace the sentence, I get that part but now let us know that what source or which sentence you might will add to that paragraph. Moreover, when I was reviewing the article I read about dalai's view from Lopez. I think that is little unclear because with out saying who is Lopez and what he has to do with this topic, it seem irrelevant to me. so if you would like to add some more information about that topic then it will be great contribution in term of my point of view.

Disha08 (talk) 21:12, 19 October 2018 (UTC)