User talk:Aradi7/sandbox

Group 5
Review #1

This article looks incomplete. I think you need more topics to talk about. Try researching the history or synthesis of the compound. Most wikipedia articles also have a brief introduction at the top of the page. Nice job on the chembox. I would suggest adding a picture or structure of the compound in the chembox so it looks more "professional".

Ewu7 (talk) 13:32, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #2

The article needs some work. First you have to fix the title of the article as the formatting doesn't look consistent and kinda looks like early 90's themed. You did a good job on researching the uses of Hydrocinnamic Acid but the other sections need to be researched. Sometimes the discovery/history is hard to find but finding the synthesis reactions shouldn't be too hard. Your chem box and references look good although the chembox could use a visible picture of the acid. You could also create a section for reactivity/dissociation ability.

Ksklwsk2 (talk) 16:51, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #3

It looks like the chembox is mostly done. You might need to include the structure of the molecule. It would be helpful if you explain a bit further about the food industry; for example, how the molecule maintain the quality of the food. Also, it might be important to include the equation of the synthesis and background info of the molecule. Good job on explaining the uses. However, this article still need more work contributed compared with other articles.

Schen77 (talk) 11:15, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #4

The structure needs to be drawn for the ChemBox. Uses section could be expanded or truncated since the cosmetic and food related uses are kind of hinted at by the main uses section; either cut off the cosmetics section and food related section and add the info from there into the main uses section or elaborate a bit with some specifics with this compound's use in the food or cosmetic industry. A balanced synthesis reaction equation wouldn't hurt as well as an arrow pushing mechanism that leads to its formation and maybe a section detailing its use as a derivative or reagent for other chemicals would.

Agsilverman47 (talk) 11:43, 4 November 2012 (UTC)