User talk:Aradl284/Cherie Dimaline/Mpitt803 Peer Review

You did well in researching Cherie Dimaline's accomplishments. In the first section try to be more concise with your sentences. There are many run on sentences that make it difficult to focus on what the sentence is about. In the Biography section, there some problems with the in-text citations. They should be linked as a footnote. It is also important to reliable sources (Textbooks, Journal articles, ect) for your wikipedia page. After fixing your citations and checking your sources, the structure should be easier to read. Overall great job on keeping neutral content. (Mpitt803 (talk) 02:30, 7 March 2020 (UTC))