User talk:Arakuresacred/Bycyklen

Spelling/Grammar
Does not meet standard. First of all, you spell Bycyklen multiple different ways throughout the article. In the first heading, it should be "Future", not "Futures". When you talk about paying for rides it needs to be a/your smartphone. the lithium battery assists riders, not assist. Kilogram needs to be plural at the end of that sentence. The heading "Manufacture" should be "Manufacturing", and in the first line I would change the wording to "Bycyklen are manufactured by the Danish company Gobike in Germany." Lastly, in the last paragraph, there are two spaces between "have" and "died".

Language
Meets Expectations What makes the Bycyklen artistic? This seems like an odd word choice.

Organisation
Exceeds Expectations

Coding
Meets Expectations I wouldn't italicise image in the last paragraph.

Validity
Meets Expectations Do you have a source for saying that they are "Copenhagen's most well known trademarks."?

Completion
Meets Expectations

Relevance
Meets Expectations I don't think that "by using Bluetooth" in the first paragraph is necessary.