User talk:Arapisar33/sandbox

Arapisar33 --

I like your plan on adding more about Thomas Aquinas because, like you mention, there are only a couple sentences about him and his contributions to Just War Theory. I am unsure about the specific you will add - something to keep in mind would be Aquinas' four points of inquiry: Whether some kind of war is lawful? Whether it is lawful for clerics to fight? Whether it is lawful for belligerents to lay ambushes? and Whether it is lawful to fight on holy days? The information for this can be found in The Summa Theologica written by St. Thomas Aquinas, more specifically found in Part II, Question 40. Question 40 is: OF WAR (FOUR ARTICLES). When making the edits or adding to the article just keep in mind using citations for you information, present the information in an unbiased manner, and have your additions to the article match the tone of the overall article. Bdevalk (talk) 03:10, 12 November 2016 (UTC)Bdevalk

Arapisar33,

I agree with what you said about adding more on Thomas Aquinas. He did not have that much information about him in the article and I think it is helpful to have more information about him. However, I would be careful with the way you present the information that he thinks on the topic. Presenting information from another person may come off biased because they are his views. You have a lot of great information in your article and it looks great, but the only things I would tell you to look out for are the potential biases and keeping the flow of your writing the same as the article you are adding to.

Jordan Jcastro ethics (talk) 20:55, 15 November 2016 (UTC)