User talk:Arayofsunshine12

Hello, my name is Alejandro Nuno.

Hi suitemate!! :) Eqw55 (talk) 17:49, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Hi Yara!! Hope you are having fun as a Paulemur!


 * Hey, this is Jameel, keep up the good work!

Welcome!
Hello, Arayofsunshine12, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Nice work on your draft.
 * 1) I can't give you feedback on what's missing. You're the expert on the topic, so you should be the best person to judge
 * 2) Language and citations - see below
 * 3) Images - again, this is something you'd know more about than me
 * 4) Title: maybe "SARS outbreak among healthcare workers" or "2002–2003 SARS outbreak among healthcare workers"

Overall comments
 * Only proper nouns should be capitalized, both in the body of the article and in section headers
 * References go after punctuation, not before
 * Don't include external links in the body of the article, like you do linking to this file.

Lead section Remember that Wikipedia articles have lead sections that are supposed to summarize all the major points of the article, but not include anything that isn't already in the body of the article.

Don't speculate.

You can cite opinions by (named) people in a Wikipedia article, but you can't make predictions on your own.

User:Arayofsunshine12/sandbox
 * Make sure you link to the main SARS article.

User:Arayofsunshine12/sandbox
 * Skip

User:Arayofsunshine12/sandbox
 * Make sure everything is sourced. There shouldn't be any text after the last source in a paragraph.

Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:10, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * These are speculation, and they're unsourced.