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Article to improve: Freedom of Movement
I believe this article could be improved in a few ways: - Some restructuring: Section names are somewhat awkward, and I feel that the regional sections should be organized geographically, not alphabetically as some are not single countries. - The regional sections need to be expanded significantly and I feel some have some NPOV issues, I will seek to address as many of these as possible. - The history section seems disconnected from the rest of the article, I will attempt to make it more coherent.

Some sources I intend to use for this include:

Lia Karsten, & Willem van Vliet—. (2006). Increasing Children's Freedom of Movement: Introduction. Children, Youth and Environments, 16(1), 69-73. Retrieved from http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.7721/chilyoutenvi.16.1.0069

Eileen, D. (2016). Freedom of Movement. Diplomatic Law. doi:10.1093/law/9780198703969.003.0024

Dowty, Alan. Closed Borders: the Contemporary Assault on Freedom of Movement. Yale University Press, 1989.

Bauböck, R. (2009). Global Justice, Freedom of Movement and Democratic Citizenship. European Journal of Sociology,50(01), 1. doi:10.1017/s000397560900040x

Ugur, M. (1995). Freedom of Movement vs. Exclusion: A Reinterpretation of the `Insider- `Outsider Divide in the European Union. International Migration Review,29(4), 964. doi:10.2307/2547734

Anghel, R. G. (2008). Changing Statuses: Freedom of Movement, Locality and Transnationality of Irregular Romanian Migrants in Milan. Journal of Ethnic and Migration Studies,34(5), 787-802. doi:10.1080/13691830802106069

Towards Schengen: the Abolition of Internal Border Controls in Europe. (n.d.). Digital Borders and Real Rights,11-46. doi:10.1163/ej.9789004165038.i-568.13

I welcome any comments or suggestions on the issue!

Arcendeight (talk) 00:31, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

Article to Improve: Human Trafficking in Mexico
I believe this article could be improved in a few ways: - The lead section is very long (3 paragraphs) and addresses information that could be moved to and expanded upon in other sections of the page. - Almost the entirety of the article is drawn from a single U.S. State Department report on the subject. - There is a lack of variety in sources for the information included. - The structure of the article mirrors that of the report rather than organizing information in order of relevance to readers - Various topics of interest and relevance including impunity and the southern border are completely excluded

I intend to improve this article using some of these sources:

Gozdziak, Elzbieta M, and Elizabeth A Collett. “Data and Research on Human Trafficking: A Global Survey.” Edited by Franks Laczko and Elzbieta M Gozdziak, International Organization for Migration, International Organization for Migration, 2005, publications.iom.int/system/files/pdf/global_survey.pdf#page=100.

Acharya, Arun Kumar. “Agrarian Conflict, Internal Displacement, and Trafficking of Mexican Women: The Case of Chiapas State.” Princeton University, Population Association of America, 1 Apr. 2004, paa2004.princeton.edu/papers/40481.

“Refugee Protection and Human Trafficking: Selected Legal Reference Materials, First Edition.” UNHCR, United Nations High Commission for Refugees, Dec. 2008, www.unhcr.org/en-us/publications/legal/4986fd6b2/refugee-protection-human-trafficking-selected-legal-reference-materials.html?query=trafficking

Talsma, Lara. “Human Trafficking in Mexico and Neighbouring Countries: a Review of Protection Approaches. Lara Talsma.” UNHCR, United Nations High Commission for Refugees, June 2012, www.unhcr.org/en-us/research/working/4f070a83540/human-trafficking-mexico-neighbouring-countries-review-protection-approaches.html?query=trafficking.

Cicero-Dominguez, Salvador A. “Assessing the U.S.-Mexico Fight Against Human Trafficking and Smuggling: Unintended Results of U.S. Immigration Policy.” Northwestern University, Northwestern Journal of International Human RIghts, 2015, scholarlycommons.law.northwestern.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1036&context=njihr.

Chacon, Jennifer M. “Misery and Myopia: Understanding the Failures of U.S. Efforts to Stop Human Trafficking.” Fordham University, Fordham Law Review, ir.lawnet.fordham.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=4173&context=flr.

Ugarte, Marisa B, et al. “Prostitution and Trafficking of Women and Children from Mexico to the United States.” Prostitution Research, www.prostitutionresearch.com/Mexico-U.S.%20Trafficking.pdf.

Estes, Richard J, and Niel Alan Weiner. “The Commercial Sexual Exploitation of Children in the U.S., Canada, and Mexico.” UPenn, University of Pennsylvania, www.gems-girls.org/Estes%20Wiener%202001.pdf.

Turner, Jackie, and Liz Kelly. “TRADE SECRETS: Intersections between Diasporas and Crime Groups in the Constitution of the Human Trafficking Chain.” The British Journal of Criminology, vol. 49, no. 2, 1 Mar. 2009, pp. 184–201. JSTOR, JSTOR.

Kappelhoff, Mark J. “Federal Prosecutions of Human Trafficking Cases: Striking a Blow Against Modern-Day Slavery.” University of St. Thomas, University of St. Thomas Law Journal, ir.stthomas.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1173&context=ustlj.

I'd appreciate any input other people interested in the subject have on the matter and may be looking to change the article significantly in the future.

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Shalor, thank you very much for passing those along! I am familiar with the student training library but will be sure to reach out with any questions. Arcendeight (talk) 22:37, 19 January 2018 (UTC)

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 * Thank you for letting me know! Glad we could clear that up! All the best, Arcendeight (talk) 16:39, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

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I am moving your message here so that topics in my talk page aren't mixed up, since you replied to my prior conversation with another user:

Hi - you just deleted my edit on Hovertravel, where I added the Estonian hovercraft service. Why? 193.40.12.10 (talk) 16:20, 12 January 2024 (UTC) Arcendeight (talk) 16:22, 12 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi there! I hope you don't mind my moving your comment here. To answer your question, I was probably a bit hasty and should have taken the time to re-do it for you. The primary issue with your edit was your inclusion of the link to a rival company in the text. I'll go ahead and add your content back while including your source as a citation (which you can do by clicking the quotation mark icon, since I see you're using the visual editor), so you can see what I mean. We don't generally include links like that in articles because it clutters the page, makes it unreadable, and is not encyclopedic in style. All the best Arcendeight (talk) 16:26, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Ah thanks - yes, I was just about to re-edit the link to be a citation when you vanished it... I could see I'd not done it properly. Cheers (from someone who lives in Estonia and will actually take this hovercraft trip on 20 January because I want to show my teen daughter what this mode of transport does!) 193.40.12.10 (talk) 16:32, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Oh my! I'm sorry for jumping the gun before you had the chance, in that case! And thank you for following up :) Hovercraft are super cool! I hope your daughter enjoyed the ride; I've always wanted to ride one myself. Warmly Arcendeight (talk) 16:34, 12 January 2024 (UTC)

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 * Hi @Bridget, I'm glad you stopped by! I think you may have made a mistake and intended to revert the prior edit. My own was simply a grammatical correction of incorrectly spelled words! I'll drop a message on your talk page as well to alert you, as I assume you would like to revert that prior edit by an IP. Please do let me know if I'm wrong! Warmly, Arcendeight (talk) 21:23, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
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 * Of course, happy editing! Arcendeight (talk) 21:32, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

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