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'Method' is better than 'methodology' Comtebenoit (talk) 04:37, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

- This is looking excellent, well done! I have added some tags to draw your attention to some areas for improvement. Comtebenoit (talk) 21:01, 13 June 2014 (UTC)

- Comtebenoit (talk) 18:22, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't think you can that that this evidence 'suggest[s] a society that values warriors', that's going too far. VIolence happened, we can be sure of that, but what is the evidence that they really valued it?
 * mention of the two layer hypothesis and gene flow is too brief to make sense of, either delete or expand
 * This further reading item does not seem relevant: Janssens, K. H. (Ed.). (2013). Modern Methods for Analysing Archaeological and Historical Glass. Wiley. Replace it