User talk:Ard1228

Welcome!
Hello, Ard1228, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peter Pan syndrome Draft Article (Peer)
Hi Ard1228! This is Melanie. I was the one in charge of reviewing your article. If I'm not mistaken, you can check my analysis of your draft. However, I want to let you know that you are doing a great job drafting the article and I want to recommend you some things: First of all, I recommend you to divide your draft into sections so the readers can know which is the lead and what is part of the content of the article. If you read my Peer Review, you will know what I'm talking about. The other thing is that remember to describe that information added in your own words. That being said, do not stop improving the article, you are doing a great job. Keep going.Melanie.riveracolón (talk) 22:14, 26 October 2020 (UTC)