User talk:AriZonaRosa

Is this ready to go live?
I don't want to get deleted on my first push out to live. Just checking if this article meets all the standards: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AriZonaRosa/John_Dougherty_%28Journalist%29 thanks : ) AriZonaRosa (talk) 23:30, 28 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Hi. I had a quick look; it could do with a bit of tweaking, and I'll do that now. Best, talk to us live, with this. Otherwise, I'll write more here in a bit.  Chzz  ► 00:19, 29 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Ok, some tips and advice;


 * When you link to a page like 'User:AriZonaRosa/John Dougherty (Journalist)" (as you did above), instead of putting the full URL, use just User:AriZonaRosa/John Dougherty (Journalist) - a wikilink. Like, e.g., I am from England. I am a dentist. My user page is User:Chzz. which makes: I am from England. I am a dentist. My user page is User:Chzz.

Re. User:AriZonaRosa/John Dougherty (Journalist)

Some things that I really thing need sorting out;


 * "Career" section - any references for that?
 * "The Keating Five" - only the first part is verifiable
 * "Governor Fife Symington" - He continued his relentless coverage - non-neutral, unreferenced claims; WP:PEACOCK etc.

I hope you'll take this as constructive criticism; if you can sort those problems out, feel free to ask for a re-check.

For more help, you can either;


 * Leave a message on my own talk page;
 * Use a - please create a new section at the end of your own talk page, put , and ask your question - remember to 'sign' your name by putting ~ at the end;
 * Talk to us live, with this or this.

The last of those is particularly useful - please try it; pop in now and say hello.  Chzz  ► 01:23, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Welcome

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Hi, you have new messages here. Thanks. Chevy monte  carlo  05:37, 29 June 2010 (UTC)