User talk:Arianawardak/sandbox

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 * You had mentioned splitting the Media response section into its own article. If you decide to go that route, here's what you should do:
 * Finish incorporating the "Reaction" section into Shafia family murders (if you haven't already), then remove it from this page.
 * Format your sandbox as you would an actual independent article: remove the Media response heading entirely, and make the subsections into sections by removing one equals sign from each side of the heading. Save the page.
 * At the top of page, in the same row as the Edit button, you should see a drop-down arrow. Click it, then click the "Move" option
 * Replace "User" with "(Article)" in the drop-down menu, and replace your sandbox name with a descriptive name for your article (ie. Media response to Shafia trials). Reason is "mainspacing" or similar. Click move.
 * Go back to the main Shafia family murders page. Remove the subsections from Media response, leaving just a summary of your article. Add a hatnote (copy this from read mode, not edit mode, and use your actual title) just under the section heading


 * I've figured out what the problem with that repeated citation is: you're using the same ref name across multiple different citations. Replace that with something distinct to each source (see WP:NAMEDREFS if you need help)
 * Be sure your tone is not too journalistic. For example, instead of saying "Maclean's outdid the rest of the media", try "Unlike the rest of the media, Maclean's..." or similar
 * Make sure publication names are italicized
 * Current footnote #6 needs full citation info. Nikkimaria (talk) 20:17, 9 April 2012 (UTC)