User talk:Ariel Qi/sandbox

Sy's peer review
The article implies detailed and reliable facts which enriches the informativeness of the article with appropriate citation of sources. It not only proposes useful information in correct format but also presents in a way that the readers may not confuse what it tries to say. The tone well-maintains neutral tone throughout the article which fulfills both the Wikipedia's and Professor's expectations. The article could be improved if the example was more elaborated - not just listing of examples but also explanation why it is so or background information. In general, it is a great job.

SeungHeonHan's peer review
Ariel's article will be delivering pretty useful information to readers without bias opinions. well-assigned citations and detailed information can be of a good help to people, who want to become familiar with platforms for k-pop singers performances, as a part of wikipedia. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hshehjue (talk • contribs) 23:06, 21 October 2018 (UTC)