User talk:Arielleb02/Oak Street

Hey Arielle. My name is Adrian. I'm one of your peer review editors. I just wanted to let you know that added some feedback to your page. Let me know if you have any questions.

Best, AJ

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This is some really nice work. I was worried that Oak Street wouldn't offer a lot to consider, but you've already established a nice structure that looks like will continue to expand upon.

Remember with citations, if two or more sentences sentences next to each other that come from the same source, you don't cite each sentence; instead, you cite the last sentence of that cluster. For example, with your paragraph on the Po Boy Festival, the first two sentence are from the GoNOLA article, so your first citation should come at the second sentence. All the subsequent sentence are from the 64 Parishes article, so your second citation would come at the end of the parargraph.

Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing the expanded sections.

jtodd1973 22:07, 6 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)