User talk:Ariellymdias/sandbox

Peer Review
Your wikipedia contribution shares much knowledge and is soundly reasoned. Although great points are proven in your work, I would try to keep the topic more neutral being as it is very controversial. Using less argumentative language would make it more "encyclopedic." KaitlynJ (talk) 03:19, 19 April 2018 (UTC)KaitlynJauregui

I think the draft you have now is strong and covers the main ideas of your subject, but I think I noticed a typo where you said "ten 53 women" and I was wondering if the ten was supposed to be there? Other than that, I think your draft is strong and could potentially be even stronger if you could find specific examples to add to the draft. Jacob defay (talk) 16:30, 19 April 2018 (UTC)