User talk:Arjun Hunt

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Hello, Arjun Hunt, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hi Arjun! I really am fascinated by your topic and can't wait to learn more about your topic! Your article is heading in a great direction, and my main point of feedback is possibly creating more content to develop further. Other than that, good luck with the rest of your project! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adogra1 (talk • contribs) 04:38, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response
Thanks for the feedback! My partner and I are looking for more content to add to the page. NASA has a short published biography of Dorothy Vaughan, which we plan to draw from.

Peer Review
Hello! I think your topic is very interesting and there is alot of information that could be added to the article. Moreover I think you could expand on the information by including more cited information, pictures, and even a more detailed timeline of her life works and her honors she received. You could expand and describe in detail the honors she received and why she received them. I also think you should consider adding in more information on her history growing up and information on her family and family life Overall this is an awesome article so far and i can't wait to read the article once it's complete! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jmcrawfo (talk • contribs) 07:23, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response
Thanks for those comments! I did not think about finding more photos, and I think that is great idea for bringing more content to the Wikipedia article. My partner and I did pick this article to focus on expanding on her life works and honors, so I'm glad that someone else shares the same view!