User talk:Armand Bogossian/sandbox

Simran's Review of Article Draft
Hi Armand! Looking over your article draft, it seems like you guys have a good grasp on how to add to your article. I also looked over all the sources and they all look credible! You mentioned that you wanted to add a history section in the beginning because there isn't one there already. My only concern would be to make sure you are neutral in your tone, and not have a bias when you are explaining the history. Besides this, everything else looks good! Classikhgirl (talk) 03:49, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

Review of Draft
Hi Armand! I agree that your additions of #OscarsSoWhite and #MeToo would be great additions to the article. The addition of images and more credible sources would definitely add to the article. One concern I would raise in response to your suggestion to add continued effort is the citation of current but reliable sources when adding that section. It will be hard to find sources outside of traditional news media to find information of continued efforts. Great analysis! I look forward to reading your first draft Emilygess (talk) 06:35, 13 March 2019 (UTC)Emilygess