User talk:ArminiusPanda/Vasodilation

Peer Review
The wikipedia article has been improved with additions of content and references. The article currently has 39 references compared to the 3 references before editing!

However, I found that the lead section included excessive information. In the second paragraph the definition for vascular resistance is included, despite the existence of the wikipedia hyperlink. The lead section is the quick overview of the article, specifics can be added in the following body sections. The sentences after the introduction sentence had repeated what was written in the introduction sentence. The sentence, "Narrow vessels create more vascular resistance, while dilated vessels decrease vascular resistance," is not necessary since the introduction sentence is, "When blood vessels dilate, the flow of blood is increased due to a decrease in vascular resistance and increase in cardiac output." The paragraph can be improved in clarity and flow.

One thing I noticed is that there isn't an image in the article. An image can greatly enhance understanding of the article as well as be visually appealing.

Overall, the article has been greatly improved! CellBlue (talk) 04:42, 8 April 2024 (UTC)