User talk:Armond.trice

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Armond.trice (talk) 03:56, 19 August 2019 (UTC)== Armond.trice/NMAC 4460 Journal ==

My journal is coming soon.

Armond.trice/NMAC 4460 Journal
My journal is coming soon.

Welcome!
Hello, Armond.trice, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hey! Since there hasn't been any new information added to your article yet, I thought I would use this peer review to give you suggestions on what to get started on.

The article is quite lengthy so I would advise that you take a look at the content that is already there. Longer isn't always better, so there may be information that isn't really necessary. Many of the sections can probably be summarized.

Also, many of the claims in the article are marked with citation needed. Some of the sources need fixing and more should be added since the article is heavily reliant on primary sources. This would be a good first step to take since your article needs to have a good amount of sources to be backed up.

When it comes to adding new content, I would recommend a section about how the book and its ideas have influenced others and the subject of new media. That way it will relate back to our class. Approaching an article that seems to have so much information can seem daunting, but there are definitely things you can do to improve it. I am looking forward to seeing your final article. — Sabub (talk) 03:14, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Check In
This is just a check in to see how your project editing is going. You should be well under way editing your project article. It appears you have not even begun. Please give me an update. If you need assistance, let me know on my talk page. —Grlucas (talk) 12:02, 18 November 2019 (UTC)