User talk:Arobson1/sandbox

Hi Allison!

Your article looks great, here's a few notes I came up with:

-Provide links to other wiki pages for the main topics like aerobic fermentation, horizontal gene transfer etc. -Watch for run on sentences -Looks like you're planning to cover a lot of topics, maybe see if you can consolidate some of the subsections to make it more accessible to a general audience Annie

Will's Comments
Your article is looking great so far! Seeing all of the different sections you are planning on covering, I suggest possibly cutting down on some info. A more general audience may get bogged down if you put too much on your page. Some of your sentences are little technical as well so when you are making your first official draft think about putting info in more laymen's terms. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wshoenberger (talk • contribs) 01:37, 21 March 2016 (UTC)