User talk:Aronyuck/sandbox

Article evaluation
Article: 8 Mile (film)

Content: Parts of the article feel kind of redundant, i.e.: "Jimmy is a blue collar worker..." and then a paragraph later "Jimmy works at a car factory." It feels like these two sentences would make more sense combined.

Tone: Tone is neutral and describes the plot of the movie in a matter-of-fact way.

Sources: The links I checked so far all work, and the majority of the sources seem to be credible.

Talk page: Article is rated C-class, and is part of four WikiProjects: Film, Eminem, Hip hop, and Detroit. Wikipedia users are discussing this topic in a very informal and back-and-forth way. It isn't cohesive at all, just shouts into the void.

Aronyuck (talk) 03:54, 1 October 2018 (UTC)