User talk:Aroub Jamal/sandbox

This is where peer review feedback for Aroub Jamal's leptin contributions should be posted. Do this by clicking the New section button above. Remember to sign your Wiki username and complete the Canvas quiz to get credit for your peer review work. UWM.AP.Endo (talk) 16:16, 12 November 2020 (UTC)

Olivia DeRose peer review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Source 3 is a primary source, but everything else looks okay.

Are the citations formatted correctly? Fix the red highlighting in source 1

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Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? 1. the article already states that high levels of leptin are associated with obesity under the obesity section. 2. The information about leptin and pregnancy is good.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? You can talk about the relationship between leptin and other hormones such as adiponectin. Libby732 (talk) 19:53, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Matthew Wagner peer review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes

Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes (the links for the last 2 are not active)

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes. However, the "High levels of leptin correlates with obesity" is already mentioned in the article. The importance of the leptin receptors in pregnancy is a great place to add info. I see there is not much info in the Wiki article right now.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? If the disease/condition your aims paper is about is not in the wiki article currently, I would add a section or add to the current section. If that section of the Wiki article is already covered well, you could add more to the "Blood Levels" section.

Wagnermr (talk) 01:18, 20 November 2020 (UTC)