User talk:Arperk8974/sandbox

Lexi, the suggestions below would enhance your contribution. I look forward to seeing more. Dr. Bricker — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rbricker (talk • contribs) 22:12, 21 November 2018 (UTC)

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Your facts seem good, and the sources match up and seem to be reliable, scholarly sources. Make sure you format them correctly so they match up when you cite them by using the cite button. I would also go through and link up names and other subjects that have a wikipedia page to their wikipedia page. Sarahtatehahn (talk) 15:27, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

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Great article, but watch out for typical grammatical errors like capitalization. Ancrai6004 (talk) 15:39, 22 October 2018 (UTC) Anna Crain