User talk:Arponce/sandbox

Please see me re progress on your article
Dear Mr Ponce

First of all Ms Shaikh noticed that your sandbox article had been deleted somehow. Are you aware of this? You have several misspellings of important names. Your prose in the first paragraph has many problems. You do not mention FN's reputation as an antisemite. I am not grading your work so you will have to check with Ms. Shaikh regarding which points she has given you so farcheck the electronic gradebook. I see a lot of work ahead of you before publishing this. DH--DHertzGSR (talk) 13:57, 20 November 2018 (UTC)