User talk:ArtistofWNY

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alberto Rey (April 8)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 23:58, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alberto Rey has been accepted
 Alberto Rey, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! ~Amkgp ✉  15:41, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

Alberto Rey
Hi I reviewed this article as part of WP:NPP. I noticed there is dozens of green links in the body of the article. The crappy software we use allows this, even thought they are illegal. This is an example. Orvis-endorsed in the lede. Please remove them all, as soon as possible, or the article will need to go back to Draft.  scope_creep Talk  07:39, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

Hi Sorry about that! I will delete those as soon as possible! ArtistofWNY (talk) 15:44, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

The external links in the text have now been deleted. Thanks for the insight!ArtistofWNY (talk) 15:53, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * You have missed a couple or three. Can you do them as well. Thanks. 16:06, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I think your were looking to cite properly. I will do for you.  scope_creep Talk  16:10, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for your help on removing those links and fixes those sources. Do you have any advice on how to improve the article to get the following notices removed? Do they have to be removed by another editor? This article may require copy editing for grammar, style, cohesion, tone, or spelling. You can assist by editing it. (June 2020) (Learn how and when to remove this template message) Unbalanced scales.svg A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject. It may require cleanup to comply with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Please discuss further on the talk page. (May 2020) (Learn how and when to remove this template message)"ArtistofWNY (talk) 19:44, 3 June 2020 (UTC)