User talk:Artjc4429

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Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:Artjc4429/Nasreen Mohamedi has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Nasreen Mohamedi, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article. Your draft is waiting for a review by an experienced editor, if you have any questions please ask on our Help Desk! Have a nice day. ArticlesForCreationBot (talk) 23:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

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Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:Artjc4429/Allan deSouza has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Allan deSouza, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article. Your draft is waiting for a review by an experienced editor, if you have any questions please ask on our Help Desk! Have a nice day. ArticlesForCreationBot (talk) 20:52, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

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 * Hello, I've left extensive recommendations at the top of your draft. MatthewVanitas (talk) 22:28, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

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 * is a sculptor, painter, printmaker, and installation artist, currently based in Bangalore, [India]. His work, which focuses on the body and its material relationship to the world, has been

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A little clarity and just the facts, please!
Dear Artjc4429:

While reading over your article, I came to the following text, and I am having difficulty in understanding it:

DeSouza’s interest in movement and place has involved a significant involvement with memory in his work.[11][12] Often the working of time figures not only as an aspect of content in deSouza’s work, but also as a crucial part of his creative process.

Do you mean:

DeSouza’s interest in movement and (position? or location? pace? places? ) has led to a significant involvement with memory in his work.[11][12] Often the (passage? effects?) of time figures not only as an aspect of content in deSouza’s work, but also as a crucial part of his creative process.

The article contains a number of passages such as the one above which are very subjective. It reads more like promotional text for an art show than an encyclopedia article. Wikipedia articles are not supposed to contain any opinions of the writer of the article, only facts. If any opinions are included, they should be specifically related to a particular photography expert, art reviewer, etc.; for example "XXX, of YYY magazine, described deSouza's work as ______"

Your article is near the top of the review list; I hope that you will take the above comments into consideration and make a few changes before the review happens. &mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 03:26, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

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