User talk:Artodd/sandbox2

Memo for Copyediting assignment

Sasha,

I noticed a few run-on sentences in your article that contained more than one idea, and I thought it would be clearer if they were separated into two sentences. I did this for a few sentences in the "Gender Gap in Documentary Filmmaking" section by replacing a comma with a period to separate the ideas. I also noticed a few commas were placed outside of quotation marks when they should have been inside, so I went ahead and fixed minor issues like that. I noticed a few titles you mention in your article were missing either quotation marks around them or italics. I italicized the journal Sight and Sound and put quotation marks around the study titled "Indie Women." I also fixed small details such as replacing two dashes (--) with an actual em dash in the places that needed it. Other than the things mentioned, I did not find any other errors in your work. Great job! I do not have any follow-up questions at the moment. I would just suggest that you look over your article and see if you can catch any more run-on sentences, as it is possible that I might have missed some during my copyediting.

-Breebellati (talk) 23:59, 25 May 2018 (UTC)