User talk:Arttalk1984

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nahem Shoa (July 28)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 14:00, 28 July 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nahem Shoa (August 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by JSFarman was:

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JSFarman (talk) 04:47, 4 August 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Arttalk1984 (talk) 16:02, 24 August 2015 (UTC) Hi, I've done the best with a friend to improve this submission. Let me know what you think. I hope it is a lot better. This is my first talk page effort, so it is all new to me. Arttalk1984 Arttalk1984 (talk) 16:02, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nahem Shoa (September 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

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 Onel 5969  TT me 15:23, 5 September 2015 (UTC)

Nahem Shoa
Hi there! I have spent some time working on your draft article about Nahem Shoa. I made many small tweaks for grammar, clarity, readability and encyclopedic tone, and formatted all your references correctly (except for a few that I don't think will be needed in the article due to not containing the information they're meant to be the sources for). I also littered the draft with [citation needed] and [not in citation given] notations — not to be mean, but to let you know where there is a problem and what the problem is. In several places I also inserted that will only show up in the edit window, to further clarify what's wrong with a particular reference. You can just delete the invisible notes once you feel you've addressed the issue each one raised. You can also delete the and  templates once you feel you've addressed each one adequately, either by inserting a reliable source or by deleting the unsourced statement.

You've made a lot of progress on this draft, and I believe it's close to being able to achieve approval to article status. Mr Shoa is an interesting person, and I think you have found just enough reliable sources to justify an encyclopedia article about him. Feel free to visit my user (talk) page if you have any questions about my edits and/or notes. I plan to come back and give the article at least one more once-over after you have worked on it again. —GrammarFascist (talk) 08:13, 8 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks now I have an idea what to do 17:11, 8 September 2015 (UTC)~ Thanks for all your help. I have learnt a lot from you, for example in how to be thorough in editing. I hope after all this work the Draft can now become an Article. Arttalk1984 (talk) 07:30, 15 September 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nahem Shoa has been accepted
 Nahem Shoa, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  Onel 5969  TT me 04:00, 2 October 2015 (UTC)
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DYK nomination of Nahem Shoa
Hello! Your submission of Nahem Shoa at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Yoninah (talk) 20:32, 7 November 2015 (UTC)

DYK for Nahem Shoa
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January 2022
Hello, I'm Levi OP. I noticed that you made an edit concerning content related to a living (or recently deceased) person   on Nahem Shoa, but you didn't support your changes with a citation to a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now. Wikipedia has a very strict policy concerning how we write about living people, so please help us keep such articles accurate and clear. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you! ― Levi_OPTalk 14:49, 19 January 2022 (UTC)