User talk:Artylearner/Monument Lab


 * Hi, Caroline. I have just looked over what you have done. I fixed like one grammatical mistake. I would just recommend working on the lead,because the lead that I saw before was a pretty decent length and flowed rather well, but the lead that I am seeing now is just a sentence and I feel like with time you can expand that a tad more. I also see that more projects have been added, I would just say to expand on the ones that have information to expand on, even if it is just a sentence. I also suggested on just adding more sections, like general information i.e., the history of Monument Lab, or iconoclasm involving the monument lab. I also suggest to double check the sources to make sure they're reputable, I think the safest bet is to go with peer reviewed articles, just so nothing happens to your work. --Tuh20608 (talk) 02:47, 16 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi Caroline, I've just left you a review: User:Artylearner/Monument_Lab/Josephrkopta_Peer_Review. Well done! Josephrkopta (talk) 13:25, 16 July 2021 (UTC)