User talk:Arvisujt/Vilma Espín

Peer Review Editing!
Hi,

For starters, your page looks great! I just had a couple suggestions to make it a little more organized!

- You can use the paragraph button to make headings and subheadings for the page, I think this would help make it seem more organized. For example: A larger font or bold for the "Early Life and Education" and the "Role in the Federation of Cuban Women"

- The bolded sentences might just be for editing purposes but maybe remove them before publishing!

- Add additional sourcing for several of the sentences in the first couple paragraphs, the sentence about her being one of the first women to study this subject in Cuba could use some evidence.

- The information all seems really good and subjective, overall great job!!

Jacob Beiter Jacobbeiter1 (talk) 19:39, 28 November 2023 (UTC)