User talk:Arw29

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mark Divine (January 23)
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Calliopejen1 (talk) 21:41, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Arw29 (talk) 01:07, 24 January 2021 (UTC)

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I've made major changes to the 'Professional Career' subsection of the article as my main goal is to convey the extensive military service history throughout the article. Am I on a closer track towards acceptance with these changes? ~

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mark Divine has been accepted
Mark Divine