User talk:Arwa syr

Welcome! :) Arwa syr (talk) 03:37, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi:

I've reverted your recent edits to the video game article. There's actually some decent material in what you've included, particularly the Brock University work (they've actually done several studies). The Indiana University stuff is a bit dodgy as it was funded by an anti-media advocacy group (something that's been pointed out several times) which would need to be noted at least, and probably contrasted with other brain imaging studies finding null effects (Regenbogen et al., 2010). I don't mean to frustrate you and I know you've worked a lot on this.

I think, too, adding new sections overlapped with some old sections and increased the disorganization of an already disorganized piece. If you've got some energy to invest, would you want to work together to improve the piece overall? We might be able to balance each other out and get a reasonably neutral POV and better organized piece from it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.100.165.246 (talk) 01:53, 15 August 2013 (UTC)