User talk:Asanc382/sandbox

Prof Garcia's Comments
Amanda: you have done an AMAZING JOB! Wow!!! I am so impressed with the amount of citations you have gotten and how you have organized them by topic. One thing, however, is that you HAVE to put in the full citations for all your pieces. This is imperative and absolutely important. We often mistakenly put in the wrong link for articles, so if you only put the link you will never be able to remember what the actual piece was. Please go back and make sure to put in all of the citation information. If you have any questions, take a look at the page that Sarah Hammill created for us (it's on BB). Very well done, however. I am very much looking forward to what you produce in this course! Alfgarciamora (talk) 13:54, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Week 6: Another amazing week! I am so impressed with everything you have added and the sources you have used. Well done! Keep up the great work, Amanda. I really look forward to seeing what you produce in this class. Alfgarciamora (talk) 12:52, 12 October 2016 (UTC)

Amazing job, Amanda! I think you are basically done with your research and content, to be honest. The only thing I would suggest is for you to maybe add a few more examples of uses of the term self-estrangement and how it applies to concepts today. Have you looked at the work by Erik Olin Wright? He is a Marxist sociologist who focuses a lot on Marxist alienation theories. Too funny that we were just talking about this in class this week. I am very proud of you and your work, Amanda. Wonderful job. =) Alfgarciamora (talk) 20:32, 4 November 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback and suggestions! I will make sure to look more into Erik Olin Wright and the uses of self-estrangement and how it applies today.Asanc382 (talk) 19:32, 7 November 2016 (UTC)