User talk:Asantiago787/sandbox

Evaluate an Article - Peer Review
First I just wanted to say that the organization and the amount and use of your sources is very nice! Something to work on can be adding some sources on the information about population size and geographical area. Maybe also think about adding a hyperlink to Orishas, so that people can see that easily if they do not know what it is, and other terms that can have the same need from readers. The way I like to think about it is: not everyone that comes across what I write is going to be learning or knows the same information I know on this topic. So personally I try to add hyperlinks and explanations for "easy access", you do really well in doing that in the beginning! Good luck with the rest of your work! Mercadesglancy (talk) 05:05, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

Angel's Peer Review
Your content was clear, concise and also easy for readers to understand, great work! I would suggest possibly explaining a few concepts in the article a bit, some concepts/words do have a hyperlink but perhaps a bit of an explanation stated in the article would help improve this article. Also I don't recall seeing an explanation on who/what Oòni is, and so maybe explaining this as well can help! Keep up the good work and good luck!Imaang (talk) 05:57, 20 October 2018 (UTC)