User talk:Asbenn

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Hello, Asbenn, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hey,

This is a great article! Super clear. I have a grammatical note: "Shingeki (新劇, literally "New drama") was leading form of theatre in Japan..." Should there by an "a" between was and leading?

About the section "War and Post War": I'm inferring that this is talking about WWI, but it might be good to specify. It might be good to include more dates in this section.

-Jo — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jring333 (talk • contribs) 04:39, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hello! I love the way this article is formatted with the inclusion. It is very clear and has a nice flow. The images are also great. I am mostly interested in the music section, and the information about his racially charged music. I want to know more about that. Are you able to find out more about how the music has been received or critiqued? I do think that without a lot of context, the block quote with the n-word is a little bit jarring, and sort of wants more analysis. Overall, great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jring333 (talk • contribs) 02:29, 10 April 2019 (UTC)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Amyehughes (talk • contribs)