User talk:Ashaikh4/sandbox

I like your topic of the traditional Korean music since not many people chose to talk about this. Also, it is nice how the history of Korean music is carefully laid out.

Hkim856 (talk) 20:36, 18 October 2018 (UTC) Well done. One way to improve this article would be to add the existing articles to your content so that the interested can be directed to other relevant topics.

It was detailed and easy to follow; perhaps dividing your one large paragraph into a couple would make it even more easier to read. Ayoshimoto (talk)

Separating the first paragraph with additional sections like royal music and people's music would make it easier to read. The second paragraph could be organized under "western influences" or something close to that. For example "When the Chosun period ended, Korean music was influenced greatly by existing Western music such as...etc.etc."Abollman2 (talk) 05:50, 22 October 2018 (UTC)