User talk:Ashkupka/sandbox

Improvements
I would create more headings for the topic to provided a more in depth explanation of the frog rather it just having a description and conservation heading. MaM4213 (talk) 13:58, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

Feedback
The lead is well written and provides the right information for a lead. You are very organized with your information and your headers. You have a good informative tone and provide many references for your topic. MaM4213 (talk) 16:35, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback and telling me how my article is doing so far. I was reading your areas for improvement but I am unsure what section you think I should add and if you have any ideas please feel free to let me know and I will be glad to add it! Again thank you fro the feedback and I have already made more improvements to the articles intro and body paragraphs since you last wrote this.Ashkupka (talk) 17:03, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

What We Can Do
I would consider adding a section about what we as humans can do to prevent the frogs from going extinct. Although they are not endangered in every state, it is clear that they are still endangered. Wciupa (talk) 16:37, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback, while I am unable to add this section at this time I hope that research comes out soon that will allow this section to be added. There isn't enough data or resources to know what humans can do to prevent the frogs from going extinct at this time. While there are studies trying to figure out why the frogs population is decreasing in certain states, the exact reason is unknown so I would not be able to add information about this topic without adding in my own opinion. Thank you for the feedback and I hope everything else was good!Ashkupka (talk) 17:01, 26 October 2018 (UTC)