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Corn is a new world crop and was not grown at Marmi. Please review the crops grown and animals tended and update that information. Please also note something about pottery and the date of excavations. Profarch (talk) 16:20, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

You mentioned that there were multiple cattle figurines, but did not mention any other styles of figurine. What other figurines were found at the site? Also, try finding some information on what crops the farmers grew and what livestock they raised.Tsulkalu (talk) 23:23, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Tsulkalu

In the first paragraph, I think the two sentences could be condensed to sound more cohesive. You mentioned that the Marmi figurines were found in other locations, and I think it would be beneficial to expand upon that. Have you found anything else regarding the Marmi besides the figurines? I think that even if it's brief, you could include the information so that your article isn't focused on one particular subject (the figurines). I think you already know this, but you also need a third source. Kitkatthy (talk) 04:01, 23 March 2018 (UTC)