User talk:Ashley.black

Welcome!
Hello, Ashley.black, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Neutral point of view
Hi! I noticed that your recent edits included content that was not really written in a neutral point of view. When writing, we cannot include anything that would make it sound like the writer (or Wikipedia) is promoting the topic at hand. Words like "enchanting" or directing people towards a particular service or attraction come across as promotional, which is why I removed some of your additions from the article. There's also an issue with subjectivity: not everyone shares the same opinion, which is why it's important for content to be written as neutrally as possible. Finally, make sure that the material is properly sourced - you need sourcing that backs up the claims, otherwise this can be seen as original research. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:57, 3 May 2018 (UTC)