User talk:AshlyLily/Mutansucrase/Jerzeefindlay Peer Review

Peer Review

Lead - Maybe remove the part discussing the two major quorum sensing systems from your overview and add that to a new section. I think this might be a little too specific for the lead - Add the section about utilizing Quorum sensing in their biofilm a little earlier in your lead.

Content - I might suggest adding a little more of a background on quorum sensing like you did when you introduced the bacteria species

Tone and Balance - Tone and balance is great

Sources - Great verity of sources - Try to find some more current sources

Images - Maybe add some images diagraming quorum sensing and how that system works