User talk:Ashlynmccormick/Deafness in Ireland/Rubymelman Peer Review

Lead: No lead section yet, but assuming that will be done later on.

Content: All content added appears relevant to the overall topic of Deafness in Ireland. Nothing seems irrelevant or unnecessary. Things are up to date, but when you say "now" you should add what year you are writing this in. I looked up the term "deaf in Ireland wikipedia" to see what came up and your article definitely had the most information for a Wikipedia page.

Tone and Balance: Content all seems neutral, nothing is bias and there are no "I" or "I think" terms. None of the content seems to persuade the reader in any particular direction, all seems like facts.

Sources and references: A lot of sources are cited, which is great. All seem reputable and reliable from what I can tell.

Organization: Really well organized with the section headers! Easy to follow.

Notability Requirements: Article is supported by many sources and links are included in the main article.

Overall: Overall, I enjoyed learning about Deafness in Ireland and I felt like your article has a lot of good and relevant information. There are a couple areas where I think grammar is an issue, but that can be easily fixed.