User talk:Ashsosebee/J. Norman Emerson

The header of your Wikipedia entry should be just a few sentences that introduce the topic. The information about the award should come later in the entry. Hoopes (talk) 18:44, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

The term "intuitive archaeology" is not commonly known, so it requires a brief definition. Hoopes (talk) 18:44, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Your list of Emerson's published work should include full bibliographic information, listing the locations and publishers as well as other bibliographic information. Hoopes (talk) 19:05, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Your entry reports on Emerson's interest in "intuitive archaeology" but does not offer any evidence of is appraisal or evaluation. What did other archaeologists think of this work? What are some alternative explanations for George McMullen's "psychic" abilities? How can this be presented in a critical yet unbiased fashion? Hoopes (talk) 19:05, 26 November 2012 (UTC)