User talk:Askyia/Numidians

Peer Review (so far)
I wanted to give you constructive criticism and compliments on what you have done so far. I appreciate how your focus on added information is centered around the culture and lifestyle of the Numidians. It adds in a rich historical understanding of the culture and people not well conveyed in the original Wikipedia article. Since not much is known about Numidian social organization, but it is known to be based on the ideals and structures of Hellenistic monarchies, it might be a good idea in your case to add a historical controversy or debate section where different viewpoints on disputed issues from academics are presented, so that readers can get a better idea of what may be true about their social organization and other subjects. There is also a source that keeps repeatedly being mentioned underneath the notes heading called "Elizabeth 2006." It may be a good idea to further elaborate on this citation generally and specify page numbers used in the bibliography rather than the notes section, but check with our professor to make sure this is appropriate. There is a sentence that starts with "Those Numidian communities" that has a grammar error around the comma area. Also, it would be generally nice to ensure all major terms have wiki links when possible, especially for concepts like Hellenistic which can be linked to an article about Greek culture/society. The Lifestyle subheading also has no citations, so be sure to add those in. Adrian Velazquez 2003 (talk) 00:58, 26 April 2023 (UTC)