User talk:AslanEntropy

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Domestic short-haired cat
Appreciate the addition of the source citation, but please do not change the spelling in an article to differ from the article title, as you did here, especially when the article's talk page explains why it's spelled that way. It's also bad form to state in an edit summary that you're making one kind of uncontroversial change, but then actually make other kinds of changes in the same edit, likely to be controversial. — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  07:59, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

Birth article
I note that you have edited the Birth article. I have checked the in-line references and I have re-written two aspects. I fixed the puzzling bit about "soft tissues of the birth canal" and the confusing bit about "abdominal contractions". Is there anything that you can learn from this feedback? Snowman (talk) 13:55, 26 April 2014 (UTC)