User talk:Asledge19/sandbox

Hi team,

It looks like you've done some good research, but the article is a bit of a mess as it is right now, and I'm not quite sure what sort of feedback I can give that would be helpful.

I'd suggest finding a good Wikipedia article about a similar topic, and use that as a template for organizing and writing your article.

Let me know if you have questions - I'd be happy to take a look at the article again once you've organized it a little more.

-- Jdfoote (talk) 17:38, 24 October 2016 (UTC)