User talk:Aspatrian

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Aspatrian! I am Claritas and have been editing Wikipedia for quite some time. Thank you for your contributions. I just wanted to say hi and welcome you to Wikipedia! If you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page or by typing helpme at the bottom of this page. I love to help new users, so don't be afraid to leave a message! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); that should automatically produce your username and the date after your post. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or place helpme on your talk page and ask your question there. Again, welcome! Claritas § 07:45, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
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Aspatria
Hi ! Sorry about the delay - I haven't had internet access for a few weeks and didn't notice your message as it was at the top of my talk (I normally only check the bottom). I think you've done some really good work on the article. It would be good to have citations for the Industry and Sport sections. If you're planning on working more on the article, I would consider primarily working on the history section - it's a good overview but lacks information concerning the middle ages and the 17th to 18th centuries. Being a small town, such information may not be immediately available, but there should be plenty of local history books covering it. It should be more straightforward to expand the sections concerning recent history. What you're ultimately aiming for is something of the standard of Lock Haven, Pennsylvania. Photographs would be a great addition. Good luck, and please contact me if you need help, although I may not reply immediately. Claritas § 21:28, 19 August 2010 (UTC)

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Hi Aspatrian. Please use the preview button until you are happy with your work to save making multiple copies. It also helps other editors if you fill in the edit summary. Happy editing.--Charles (talk) 09:48, 20 August 2010 (UTC)