User talk:Astleyfletcher

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gerlach and Ely Instructional Design Model (October 6)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 17:10, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Thanks_Robert McClenon
Thank you Robert for your prompt and thorough feedback. Although my article has not been accepted, I am encouraged by your comments, and will work on revising and correcting as you have advised.

Looking forward to being a full-fledged contributor to Wikipedia. Astleyfletcher (talk) 04:49, 9 October 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Gerlach and Ely Instructional Design Model has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Gerlach and Ely Instructional Design Model. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 14:15, 9 October 2016 (UTC)

Leading spaces before paragraphs
Hi Robert,

I am not clear about the "leading spaces" before paragraphs. Can I treat each step of a process separately under its own heading? Would each of those steps be the paragraph that you refer to? Should eliminate the steps and write it all in prose? I have done some adjustments but I am not sure if I have met the paragraph requirements.

Thanks for your feedback.Astleyfletcher (talk) 09:45, 10 October 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gerlach and Ely Instructional Design Model (November 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Smmurphy was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Gerlach and Ely Instructional Design Model and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Smmurphy(Talk) 15:28, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Gerlach and Ely Instructional Design Model


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 18:50, 22 May 2017 (UTC)